“ I believe what you published was very reasonable. However, think on this, what if
you added a little content? I mean, I don't wish to tell you how to run your blog,
but what if you added a title to maybe get a person's attention? I mean blog topic is
a little vanilla. You might glance at Yahoo's front page and
note how they write article titles to get viewers interested.
You might add a video or a related picture or two to grab readers interested about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it might make your blog a little bit more
interesting. ”