“ I believe what you typed made a great deal of
sense. But, what about this? suppose you added a little information?
I am not saying your content is not solid., however what if you added a title that grabbed people's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda plain. You might glance at Yahoo's front page and watch how
they write post headlines to get people interested. You might add a video or
a picture or two to grab readers excited about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it would make your posts a little bit more interesting. ”