“ What you said was very reasonable. However, what about this?
what if you typed a catchier post title? I ain't suggesting your information isn't good, but what if you added something that grabbed people's attention?
I mean blog topic is kinda vanilla. You should peek at Yahoo's front page and see how
they create post headlines to get viewers to open the
links. You might add a video or a related picture or two to
get readers interested about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it could make your posts a little livelier. ”