“ I think what you posted made a bunch of sense.
But, what about this? what if you added a little information?
I am not saying your content isn't solid., however suppose you added a
title that makes people want more? I mean blog topic is kinda boring.
You might glance at Yahoo's home page and note how they write post headlines
to get viewers to open the links. You might try adding a video or a related picture or
two to grab readers interested about everything've written. Just my opinion, it could bring
your website a little livelier. ”