“ I think what you posted made a ton of sense. But, what
about this? suppose you wrote a catchier title?
I am not saying your content isn't solid, but suppose you added a post title that
makes people want more? I mean blog topic is kinda boring.
You should look at Yahoo's front page and see how they create news titles to grab viewers to click.
You might add a related video or a picture or two to get people interested about what you've written. In my opinion, it might make your blog
a little bit more interesting. ”