“ I think what you posted was actually very logical.
But, what about this? what if you added a little information?
I am not saying your information isn't solid., however suppose you added a post title that makes people want more?
I mean blog topic is kinda vanilla. You might peek at Yahoo's home page and watch
how they write news titles to get people to click.
You might add a video or a related pic or two to get people
interested about what you've got to say.
In my opinion, it would bring your website a little bit more interesting. ”