“ I think what you posted was very reasonable. However, think about this,
suppose you added a little information? I am not saying your information is
not good., but what if you added something that makes people desire more?
I mean blog topic is kinda plain. You might glance at Yahoo's home page and see how they
write article headlines to get viewers to open the links.
You might try adding a video or a related picture or two to get people interested about what you've got to say.
Just my opinion, it would bring your blog a little bit more interesting. ”