“ I think that what you posted was actually very reasonable.
But, think on this, what if you added a little content?
I mean, I don't want to tell you how to run your website, but what if you added something that grabbed a person's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda vanilla.
You should peek at Yahoo's home page and watch how they create news headlines to grab people to open the links.
You might add a video or a picture or two to grab readers excited
about everything've got to say. Just my opinion, it might make your
posts a little bit more interesting. ”