“ I believe what you posted made a lot of sense. But, what about this?
suppose you were to write a awesome headline?
I am not saying your content is not good., but what if you added something to possibly grab a person's attention? I mean blog topic is kinda vanilla.
You ought to peek at Yahoo's front page and note how they write post
headlines to get people to open the links. You might
add a related video or a related pic or two to
get readers interested about what you've got to say. In my opinion, it would bring
your website a little livelier. ”