“ I think that what you composed made a great deal of sense.
However, consider this, what if you added a little information? I am not suggesting your content isn't good, however suppose you added a headline that makes people want more?
I mean blog topic is a little plain. You might peek at
Yahoo's home page and note how they write post titles to get
people to click. You might add a video or a picture or two to
get readers interested about everything've got to say.
In my opinion, it would bring your website a little bit more interesting. ”